Reviews of How I traveled the Omniverse

Ummm k, the writing is very understandable, its nice, neat and organized so it doesn't make you go 'wut' after you finish a chapter and the grammar is very good so if you start reading the book you dont get turned off by the grammar itself and go 'k this book is **** coz the grammar is ****'. Mm updates are very very punctual and frequent, probably one of the most frequent for good novels like these. Story develpment, a bit on ass crack deep side with its past lovers and all but the story so far has developed nicely because its not too revealing so no blatant character exhibition like it doesn't focus on one character and it isn't very unrealistic where the guy goes to the chick and is like *grabs ass and starts groping her*(the girl) 'aah i love you lets get married', so its reasonable. The characters are awesome and all have their nice personalities and they fit together nicely, especially the mc because you could fit him so nicely in a different story so nicely and naturally it makes it more interesting for the reader. The world background is well designed even if used from a different novel (idk if it was a real novel cos I'm too lazy to actually check so idk), it also probably has some original aspects because of the subtle marks and if that novel wasnt real then good job coz you just made a massive world on your own which shows your awesome skill you use in every chapter. Ps: here have a free bahuet from me 🥖🥖🥖🥖

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It's a great fic, please keep it going.:)ababababababbabababababababababababababababababababababababababababababbaababbabaabbababababababababababa

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Hi hi am really really enjoying this novel so.....much and also the very fast updates,hmmmm and also am very single ladies an ready to be taken.🤣😂😂

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Saw the art on discord and the story’s seems pretty good so far... Keep it up.. ...............................zzz.......................................

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