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Comments of chapter undefined of Living the Great Sage Life with my Fairies and Lovers in a New World

Orange_Rain
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Psan
PsanLv5Psan

By the way.mm i started to read your novel just cause it had fairies on it and on the title. I dont recommend you change thebtitoe but rather add fairiesnto the events. But yiu gotta remmeber thst the last 20 or so chapters were focused on about 2 days and 1 day the fairies were having a party.

Psan
PsanLv5Psan

Fairies are the biggest part of the lore. You just have to include them. The last few chapters were just focused on the familiars. Just make the fairies become part of the chapters again. Include them in all chapters and in the dialogs. Since they sre also invisible to most you can also have them chst with soar during the chapters... like asking him to share sarise milk with them.... they can even BATH on it. Since they are small enough... also wonder if soar can do the same "massage" he didnto the angel to his fairies.... they will surely be happy

Clarence_Ng
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I love this book, can you focus more on this book?

Orange_Rain
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