Reviews of Lightning Sage(dropped)

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Story is aite and has potential All I'm hoping for is for the story to keep going this way and not nerf him to keep the story's canon events from happening like other novels Also, he better make his own moves instead of just stealing the Raiton: Kirin and Lightning Blade cus that just makes him a second-rate copycat

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personally for me characters development matters a lot i don't care about the story all i want is an good characters development, and all this is perfect in this fan-fic author is doing great, till now there is not much story development except for some minor changes which can do some major differences in story ahead.

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Ok but I can't stand this novel the way he gained his sharingan especially with the cultivation elements to it and not trying to say your novel is bad or anything but it is really bad and seriously doesn't deserve the high rating it has

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Overall I genuinely enjoy this novel I dont think being not picky is fair to the author who has put in so much effort especially when there are so many parts I like Thank you for your efforts

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If author can write this story correctly and with lots of updates..... This sure will be a huge hit.... I also hope MC can use technique like the Raikage as it will suit him the best....... Please save the UCHIHAS.... Like let Itachi kill the old foggies but let the young ones alive......

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