BotwaCazador
I liked the pace and the vibe and I would have continued reading if not for the fact that every single character beside the MC is female, I have nothing against women but it takes me out of the novel every time end it doesn't feel natural or organic because in real life : males are likely to have more male friends than females, and it seems like the author is achieving some wish fulfillment while alienating 90% of his reader
One of the best books I have ever read. When I first starting reading this book I thought the main character would have a generic background onto how he go into where he is. Also this story balances the character as in he does not always win battle and has to struggle to continue onwards. Keep up the great work.
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One of the best written stories on here by far! I have a few gripes about the story and a couple of the plot points and developments, but all in all, the pros far out weigh the cons, definitely a must read if VRMMOs are your thing Side note, why is Nix a salamander hybrid? It would make more sense to make him a phoenix hybrid wouldnβt it? Its literally in the name and salamanders arenβt a big/well known/famous fantasy/mythological creature