Becoming Immortal

I love the fact that the author used the world but not the characters of the original story and started at a different time in that world, I personally didn't like twilight but I love this fanfic non the less and all its potencial, I just hope that this great story is not dropped like others

This is the best fanfic I m reading in the moment , still none of the original's cringe . .

Amazing love the power system you started the MC with, also love the idea of how you started him in the bronze age where he could start from the beginning for his journey and the ambitious character you gave the MC's hunt for true immortality and power i look forward to the future of the story 😃

It's good, you should read it. NO, seriously stop reading this review, just go read the chapters. Why are you still here? Go read the novel. Are you still here? Then don't forget to use power stone ..

I've been seeing many Twillight fanfics being recommended to me lately so I finally decided to try one. I have never read the books nor have I watched the movies and yet I am thoroughly enjoying this. I didn't get lost very often at all and when I did a quick wiki search will solve my problem. Only thing that bothers me about this fanfic is the fact that the MC is a slut, fathering children then leaving them without even bothering to raise them. I understand that he's currently living in the bronze age so behaviour like this is common and he's also trying to find out if his children would inherit his abilities but the MC came from modern times, can't he be more civilized? At least be a decent father ffs!

@Sparetire I really love your work please continue. I am waiting for the next one so please whenever you can post another one. This fanfic is hands down the best twilight fanfic on this site, or app. This fic is 100 percent crystal clear hands down hands up without a doubt obviously THE BEST here.

The character could do with a bit more details in developing and the development of plot could be less rushed but overall great. An original fanfic that isn’t just some garbage rehashed version of its counterparts.

Very good novel.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story one of the best books on this website and would have a 5 star rating if the author would continue this story I want to know the conclusion.

This is way better than I thought. Personally I’m not a fan of twilight but I have to admit that this fanfic is intriguing. I really did enjoy so maybe you will too. It would be perfect if we have a mass release though

I'm loving the story so far I can't wait for more of it come out. It's very different from what I had originally expected so it'll be awesome to see where you take it.

This is great, don't drop please. Thanks.

so far it's a gem with unlimited potential that i would love to see completed. Please keep up the good work.😊 I'll be waiting for more.........................................................................................

This a very good novel it may be a bit confusibg in the beginning, but it is definently a #hidden gem. So go read it now. This is just a filler so what are you reading for you donkey.

the overall story is really good and addictive to read the character is innovative don't know how will you insert it in the twilight story but that's the interesting part BUT you need to release more chapters at least in the beginning to attract more readers other than that good job

How can a Twilight fanfic be good!? THIS MUST BE THE WORK OF THE ENEMY [STAND]!!!! ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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This story has a ton of potential, loving mc's starting point. Keep up the good work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Dont drop Dont drop Dont drop

I haven't been able to find any good Male MC for twilight so I thank you for this (I hope for your updates to be consistent.) (Iv read to latest update (chapter 5) I think you shouldn't turn him yet and should try to find a way to power up without turning (I'm extending review because I need 140 characters it says)

I think this story is abandoned, otherwise my grade would be much higher. It's a shame I was very interested and it was a very original approach to the saga.