Reviews of This novel was thrownaway

Since no one seem to want the review, I will have the honor to be FIRST. The bad: the English is pretty bad. But I have read many MTL story, so I was able to adapt fast. The author lack experience and that show in the story. The good: if you look past the grammar(which by the way is becoming better as time pass) you'll be able to read a very interesting story. The author also have stable updates so you won't have to wonder when he will stop writing. I really like what he is writing and I hope that he will become even better

I do think this has the potential to be a good story. From the very beginning, Really we dont see a reason to have to be interested in characters. Although they are good, they dont seem to have a goal in the first chapter. Anyway good story.

The writing is really good i like it. Story pretty cool too..............................................................................................

The English is very bad, I suggest you try to rewrite them, author. I can even some words that's not even English at all, probably typo so u have to fix that too. Grammars and punctuations is very badly used so pls fix that too. Pls don't be discouraged and keep improving, ik u can do it 👍

With my ratings im completely honest with them. and I don't want to bring any authors down because of writing quality, especially you are aware of it. Keep writing and don't be discouraged, keep it up :)

Well , just pick the book and started reading. Can't say anything about the characters development . But hope that author can improve . All the best author . Good luck

Well!I'm the author of this novel,and i promise you just read with patience and you may find a good story,if I talk about grammar problem as is pointed out that my grammar was wrong,I have edited my chapters and now one can read more smoothly,and I thank to my readers,though very less in number presently,they make me feel satisfied.please keep reading the chapters,some chapters are not important part of main storyline so a little bit boring are marked skippable my me,I recommend you to skip them and read them afterwards.

The story is just a few chapters in so its too early to write a concise review. But from what I have read until now, the author seems to struggle with English. The story seems to be riddled with grammatical errors, sentences structures etc but if the reader is able to look past that, then it makes for a good read even though it has a jarring feel to it. Maybe you can look for an editor who could polish it to make it more palatable to grammar-nazis like me 😂 But still it's a good effort and I commend you for having the courage to try your hand at it even though English isn't your first or second language. All in all, it's apparent that the author has just started writing. My only advice to the author would be to not give up, continue writing until you reach the pinnacle of success. All the best for your future endeavours!

Author has improved a lot now and i would now prefer it to read story has some potential gramatical errors have improved a lot now character developement still need some work

English quality is not good need to improve vocabulary and gramatical errors but opitimistic pont is he has a good story but only need to improve the grammer😊😊😊