Reviews of FORGIVE ME ,MY LOVE

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This story has just started, but the plot and characters are progressing nicely. Since you said at the end of the last chapter that you're planning to transfer the contents to another novel I will give you the benefit of the doubt in terms of updates. The world hasn't really been explained yet so I'll give you a 4. Ohh boy... I'm sorry to say this, but the grammar really needs work. It distracts from the story quite a bit and it needs to be clearer. I recommend shortening some of your sentences and not describing everything in one long description. Your use of dialogue is not bad though. Keep working at it! Fix the grammar and your story will be great!

Since the story only started, I can't say much about it. The grammar needs sort of improvement, and other than that, it has a great start. Keep it up!