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The autism system

MrBookL

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CassTheEevee
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Personally Mr author dude, just from your English i can tell its gonna be far better than others, so build your story how ya want to. Also apparently that wasn't 140 characters, so there.

MrBookL
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I know I am the author of this novel, but eh, I feel like writing a review. You can trust this due to the fact that I am always honest to myself. That is also why the star rating is so low. Frankly, the world's background only starts getting good around chapter 10. Before that, it is just info dump after info dump. After chapter 9 though, it should get a lot better. Oh, right, chapter 6 is pretty much a filler chapter. I apologize for that. I mean, it does still have some effect on the story, and it is an interesting chapter with its own good and bad points. But it doesn't fit the flow of the story at all. update wise, it is really good. I have been posting 2 chapters a day, every day. Each one around 10 - 15 pages long. I don't think I am going to be able to keep this writing pace for much longer, however, at the bare minimum, there will be a chapter a day. The writing quality isn't too bad. At least, I can read over it multiple times without getting too annoyed. And the story is developing now that I have an actual idea of where I want it to go. At first, I just wrote something up on the spot, and the first 7 - 8 chapters had no real plan. But now they do, and it should get a lot better. Oh, and I am not going to be humble. The main character, George, is great. And if you disagree, do reply and tell me why. I would love to argue with you over that. Thanks for reading my book, or at least thinking about it!