While it is well written, by ch.11 I knew I couldn't read this. I don't have any positive feelings towards the MC. Her happiness is not important and I think she deserved to be tricked so badly.
since this is only the first couple chapters, I won't mark as spoilers because it's just obvious that this part was going to happen.
The brother, family and friend of the MC has repeatly told her that she has been lied to by the boyfriend and best friend. It's been 7 years and they weren't even hiding their relationship very well. they held hands in front of her. Everyone brushes it off as her being innocent, but come on. She wasn't sheltered on a mountain top. but fine, I could have accepted that and moved on until she confirmed the truth. They were cheating for 7 years. they are engaged. he was using her for her family's business connections and to link their business investments. She was using her to connect to her uncle for her acting career and as a corporate spy for her dad. Obviously, you would think the MC would tell her family because 1. they need to know not to continue helping these people succeed and 2. to try and figure out how to protect themselves and their businesses. but what does she do? We idea not to tell them anything! are you kidding me? These 2 horrid little gremlins are still making money off your family and have snaked their way in and you are not going to give the people you love a heads up that danger is literally in their house?
nope.
I have no idea why the good friend loves and supports the MC so much or why I as the reader should want to cheer for her. There has not been a single redeeming thing I have read that would make me support her. She beat up her brother for saying something bad about the cheating scum! she threatened to stop being friends because she said something bad about the scum friend. These are people you love and have in your life and you don't have any trust or faith in them or are even willing to hear them out?
so, she blindly believed everything that the scum people said.
She begged and hurt the people that loved her over and over to help the scum and after a pathetic sorry, she them doesn't let her family know to watch out for the scum couple.
What exactly should I like about her that makes me want her to be the MC and have a happy and successful life?
If the author had her see the truth after her dream and put the pieces together herself. having that revelation of her own idiocy and then warning her family about the tricks, lies and scams, I think I could support and continue the story. The whole dream thing was pretty much pointless. You literally could have just had her see or hear something. all it did was show just how much abuse she was willing to accept. It had no impact on her or the story.
I just... It just made me frustrated.
I would not read this, even with free chapters.
