Collin's Otherworld Adventure

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It has potential. I like the fast pace, although it might be good to experiment with the pacing so you get a variety throughout the story. I like that you don't get mobbed down with visual exposition but focus directly on the story. With a little refinement, this could be really good. I look forward to reading more.