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Comments of chapter undefined of Prime Originator

Sugakookie_3
Sugakookie_3Lv5Sugakookie_3

Sounds good, I like the story and pace.

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Passby
PassbyLv6Passby

I think he's.. Immature? Innocent? Or naive I don't know. I thought he came from the Divine world where the strong eat the weak.

Morty756483
Morty756483Lv6Morty756483

I liked the previous chapters, but MC's behaviour right now erased all good feelings about this novel. You need to rewrite this chapter

House
HouseLv15House

MC acts so immature / innocent wtf is he not a divine lord???

Chunchunmaru_sama
Chunchunmaru_samaLv6Chunchunmaru_sama

Absolutely disappointed in mc's character. Thinking calmly, those thugs must have raped other girls before since they seem experienced... And the mc just let them go while the thugs saw his face.... (just thinking all the troubles it could give gives Me a massive headache) And I thought he was raised in the divine realm where his father was powerful. I expected him to be ruthless and arrogant since he had powerful backings in his past life... But.... I'm not blaming anyone its just I thought this was going to be a good read.. *sigh* My expectations was too high.

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assassinsking
assassinskingLv5assassinsking

lets see how long this sheltered fathers boy lasts in the real world..

Here_is_a_Potato
Here_is_a_PotatoLv5Here_is_a_Potato

I'm having trouble picturing the world MC is located in rn. Author might give some more information and description...

ManEr
ManErLv5ManEr

Please dont follow the Medicine God King novel's path, when he just forget the girl for the sakr of revenge, the trune revenge for me is for you to live a good live an later you can destroy your enemy's lifehood and enjoying the care yout wives. Hmm because this novel have harem tag so its wives right? Cmon all of you must be agree with my thought right?

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AbyssalGod
AbyssalGodLv5AbyssalGod

What is this book about, abilities or cultivation, and in which era is it based on?

whitepage
whitepageLv12whitepage

Yes I know it is a fantasy book. Why build a wall using metal? Aren't there any better building materials like for example reinforced concrete, or even stone? Also how do you even build a metal wall? Do you pour is straight in place, or weld metal plates (that doesn't make any sense, because the plates would be too thin). And the final question - if all the metal is used for the wall do they have any cutlery, belt buckles, hinges or are they too expansive for the common folk?

Tyler_Jess
Tyler_JessLv2Tyler_Jess

nice chap

Immortali
ImmortaliLv6Immortali

Was she so poor she couldn't even take a cab? Oh!.. wait, there would have been no need for the Mc to save her if she took a cab. Damn!

Weber007
Weber007Lv11Weber007

Even after getting pinned and clothes torn she did not cry???? WTF

Gabriel_Diaz_1060
Gabriel_Diaz_1060Lv14Gabriel_Diaz_1060

Auther I'm not mad just disappointed. Why didn't he kill them, it obvious people like that never change. And it will only invite trouble for him and the girl/Lady/person.

Brown101
Brown101Lv13Brown101

Couldnt he cover his face with something to hide His face with or sneak attack insted of yellIng but know he had To act like 2 rate MC

KacbRe
KacbReLv4KacbRe

stupid dumb

EddyZ
EddyZLv13EddyZ

So basically the magneto of this world.

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El_Rasskull
El_RasskullLv4El_Rasskull

[img=recommend] Thanks for the chapter [img=recommend]

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teachhhh
teachhhhLv4teachhhh

I don't see any problems with this chapter, good work author

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Reaper_210
Reaper_210Lv5Reaper_210

Thanks for the chapter

BigSaberBr0
BigSaberBr0Lv11BigSaberBr0

Shet tons of inconsistencies but I'll give it a few more chaps and we'll see how it goes.