Is It wrong for a Gamer to be in the Dungeon?: Familia Myth of Zetta

Pretty awful the grammar was bad enough I got a headache from my brain auto correcting it and the spelling too much the story has no foundation the author reacts poorly to criticism he breaks the normal rules of world which is good if done right it wasn't the mc is pretty much copy and paste from every other novel no such thing as character depth or development Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash

Too many skips !!! No Foundation at all to understand basic consept of the world the MC is in... its like a continuation part of previews story or novel that i didnt know... and "a body that moves on its own before the decision" is a low level and illogila reasoning ! Its PLOT is not define cause of skipping ! It lacks enough explaination and world building !!! POORLY MADE FANFIC !

Wouldn't recommend. Although good start on book but towards the latter the author becomes undecided on the plot. Can't focus on mc building, can't do proper grammar continuously, all that's good was the plot......WAS.......until he destroyed it by focusing on a side character. Well it's to be expected to drop I mean he can't even focus on his MC how can he develop a story without developing the actual MC.

well it's not a bad story just very very very confusing and the mc is pushed all over the world (at first he didn't bother with anyone else he clings to people for nothing)

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I think this Fan-fic had a Great Potential, but the grammar is bad and sometimes you can‘t understand what the **** is going on. one critical is that the story is jumping from one side story to another and i don’t know what the main storyline is after the 20th chapter.

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A pretty good novel, there's something off about volume 1, but after that the story gets better. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☝👇👈👉👈👉

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You should give the MC a quest becuse he did have a system. It's quite good to read I just wish that you make more scene with MC and Artemis.

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[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] hay! can you please add an option in the system "daily quest" with rare consumables as a reward [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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You are writing a great story don't take the bad reviews to heart and use them to update the story in a better way. From personal experience the story has been great so far and your Granger has also improved 😁😁😁

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Can the MC have a harem. And make him save haruhime and make the MC ask her to join atemis familia? And can you make his gamer ability have a A.I?

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