Comments of chapter undefined of Born Again
Born Again
RenuKakkar
Chapter comments36
You are very knowledgeable and know your stuff! This is so rich in quality <3 Only thing I'd say is that it's a bit of information overload. But this could just be me :) some people like all the information from the start so they can just dive into the story, meanwhile others (like myself) like have information trickle in through the chapters. Either way, this is very well-written and I hope this takes off! I can seriously imagine this on the shelves of a Barns-and-Noble or something. Keep it up, much love!
My grandparents also had a love marriage. My grandma is Hindu and my grandpa is Buddhist. But they were excepted later by society. It was hard. But they fought hard for their love. Your story took me to their story. When I first heard it from my parents, I always admired them. love your story and its reality that you have written. Want more chapters.
Hi Author, I loved how the characters, their back stories and sights were magnificently described. It perfectly builds up the story. I have read chapter one as an introduction and kept me wanting to know more about Tania, her dreams, her family and the places mentioned in the story as I am fascinated in travelling myself but can't seem to have enough time and budget to do it. Thank you for fuelling my imagination. It's like you're taking me to these places. Plus, this showcase how amazingly observant you are to bring a piece of reality and an over-all homey vibe into this. As a reader, I don't really pay attention to grammar as long as I feel that the story getting into me... But based on how the over-all structure was laid out, it's very good to read. I will soon give another feedback once I finish reading the other chapters. Cheers to you author! All the best. ❤️[img=recommend]
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Hello! I am going to try to leave a comment for a few chapters and break them up into two parts: the first will be grammar, and the second the actual story. Grammar: Your grammar and mechanics is very good. Mistakes seemed more like typos than lack of writing ability (for example the first or second paragraph starts with “an” rather than “as”). A quick proofread will solve any issues I did see. Some from my memory are listed below: -there was a loose quotation mark at the end of a paragraph -a few words were misspelled or replaced with a similar (but incorrect) word. Great job! The story read very well. Story: You have provided a lot of facts! This is an interesting novel on this app just because it is not set in a fantasy world. I like real-world settings and appreciate the research you did. That being said, there wasn’t much about the story or main character. The facts were cool, especially since I know nothing about your setting, but the whole thing read like this, “Here is some of the main characters background from their childhood. The main character is interested in history. Here are a bunch of historical facts.” While there isn’t much wrong with this, I would have liked to learn more about the main character. Perhaps site where she learned this facts or why this information was so important to her. The mention of her dreams is very interesting, you could relate each fact to a dream the MC had. This would add a few sentences, but give a deeper impression of the main character. Overall, great work! I am excited to get more into the story element and main plot. Historical fiction type stories are fascinating too me, and you have great detailed writing for this genre.
Sharma was apparently from the Brahmins? There strictly, you need to cost a family of your choice of parents. Choosing a wife or husband for love is not welcome. And then love passes ... I saw in India, one real such case. Everyone on campus condemned such a student. He also cheated on his wife, even though she was pregnant. He already had two children. In the end, they divorced. A wedding in India cost at least an average of $ 28,000. Well, as I heard. But in your story, it was true love! Does the story seem curious ?! But why did the girl have two surnames. And why Gagarin? Because it's a sonorous last name? As an author, why did you choose this particular surname? I'm just curious! Why exactly Russia? Although, India and Russia were allies! Maybe that's why? Thanks!