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It's good, you should read it. NO, seriously stop reading this review, just go read the chapters. Why are you still here? Go read the novel. Are you still here? Then don't forget to use power stone ..
weak fucking mc he can't even beat luffy before time skip and he is already 3 years older than luffy author fanboying to luffy so he make it seems like luffy is a talented genius lol in the canon before time skip he always win with luck and plotarmor can't even with this pure fucking stupidity
Epic you should have viola,and baby 5 fall in love with bob. It would be amusing if there was some ******* between vivi, and two other girls who love bob!
I like it. Personally, I think itโs a level above other one piece fanfic on this website/App. Just donโt be nievve and listen to reviews(good or bad) to decide, try reading some chapters yourself to see if you would like it.
Atrocious cringey writing style I wanna just ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ Atrocious cringey writing style I wanna just ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ Atrocious cringey writing style I wanna just ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ Atrocious cringey writing style I wanna just ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ
Mc is such a dick. Jerking for 10 years and he dream of saving whitebeard? Save my ass. In the first place why did he chose one piece? Too be lazy? I suggest to author to just suck his own dick. Don't ask me. I know he will be happ. Hahaha
Esta es la mejor historia de fan fiction de one piece que e leรญdo!! Tiene una historia original, un protagonista interesante, un buen ritmo de salida de capรญtulos y un magnรญfico contexto en general!! La recomiendo para todo el mundo!!!
I just read first 4-5 chapters so I can't judge what happen in later chapters.. maybe it become good? about the chapters I read there are many mistakes and mc just eat and sleep in his 10yrs stay in Luffy's Village ๐ so i decided not to read anymore ... If you found the latter chapters good please comment here so I can read it later Thanks ๐๐
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Okey not gonna lie i wasn't expecting this to be this good i was thinking i well be reading a few chapters and give up on this novel like all the other novels on this site, and continue on my way but this novel took 2days of my time and it was worth it. I recommend this if you are out of novels to read not to much action but enjoyable
Best novel of one piece i have ever read i hope it wont be dropped ....pppppppppppppppppppppp๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Its very well written story with an interesting plot. The characters are described very good too. I would this novel had amazing potential to be a very good story.
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********************************************************************************************************** One of one piece fanfic with good originality in the stories. Hes not too op too ..........................
Hey great story but where does the quicksword in his name come in? Also another thing is his league of legends thing is limiting his potential and power a lot. Like since his swordsmanship is s does that make him better than mihawk? Obviously not otherwise heโd easily be too op right? Hope you can incorporate stuff where he can get himself more base stats and work his way up
This is the First fanfic that i'm can considerate funny and good in the same time, the MC is hilarius and smart, grammar is good too, continue the good work author
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This is an amazing fanfic. You should really read it. It does have grammatical mistakes and that sort of stuff but it doesnt have that many and they arent that bad.
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