Reviews of Sternritter Calendar (ATG fanfic)
Sternritter Calendar (ATG fanfic)
General_Paragon
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Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse piss, horse shits ,dog shits and every shits in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet
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Have you read ATG at all? Then reading this is pointless. It's just re-telling everything from canon. Except where Yun Che got by with cunning and skills, this guy uses (or should I say misuses) completely overpowered Quincy abilities. Them being OP isn't what bothers me, it's that he does stupid ass stuff with them. It's just ATG with an idiot MC. I'd give this one a pass.
MC uses Visionary power to make a lambo to flex on villagers, I’m sure that tells you enough about his intelligence, also he doesn’t have memories of ATG, so it feels like you’re reading a ****ty version of ATG since he himself is Yun Che, basically its lame as hell bland boring waste of my time and your time
Okay, so my review to this Novel will be a little bit neutral. So far, the intro and the backstory are very unique and interesting. However, there are a LOT of things that do not make sense in the story afterwards.... 1) Although the character went through hellish events and earned a will of steel, he still should've had some sort of problem with his psyche when reincarnating. However, this does not show. Instead, the character just seems like any other protagonist that wants to be cool... 2) His ability "Visionary" which allows him to create anything and do anything(?) is not explained in detail and instead makes it seem as if the protagonist can just do and create anything... (Basically he has a Broken ability...) 3) This might not bother everyone, but it sure is annoying, is how the Author places the person or characters name before they speak. As if it were a script for a movie. I would suggest doing something else instead. Maybe like, "I'm going to look cool in this lambo, Jean said to himself as he stared at the black Lamborghini" or something similar. 4) My fourth reason for giving this Novel an average rating is because he seems a bit off with one of the characters? This reason may be a little petty, but 😤😤😤 he messed with one of my favorite female characters in ATG. Xia the Frosty Wife 😂 He made her seem so docile when he introduced her to Jean (the protagonist). I mean... he just casually grabs her hand and makes her get in the freaking Lambo. I'm not sure about this... but I don't think her character would allow him to just casually grab her hand.... I mean C'MON she's the Icy Wife!! Not the docile wife... Now then, although I've said a lot. I also believe that this Fan-fic Novel has potential. All the Author needs to do is a few rewrites and this would make an Excellent Fan-fic. :)
This is a great redo of the original. I hated the rape and Yun Che abandoning his woman so I stopped reading the original but this one does not have that so it is better in my opinion. Also the MC is majorly OP so if you do not like that then you should not read this. Like all the authors works the updates come out often and the grammar is really good. There were also a lot of crap that went wrong for the MC in the original that does not for this one so it does not feel as messed up. I recommend this if you want something with an OP MC and a good story line. The author has also started to introduce his own elements to the world in the newest chapters so there is content that he makes so it is not just a rewrite.
This is an amazing story, i absolutely love the references and sense ofhumor, there both amazing. U didnt make mc a love struck fool, u added romance nicely, gave him a real personality other then typical mc, didnt let him get pushed over by anuone and several other minor thungs which made him seem all the better. U even added an unexpected element like that glitch. Great story, keeo updating and going.
