Roeselawik
WARNING BETA MC!!!! - MC still retarded ✔️ - MC still no backbone ✔️ - Author still giving ****ty excuses for a BETA MC. ✔️ ^like it's weak to strong guys lil does he know he has been weak/retarded/useless/spineless for more then a year Gets blackmailed more than fmc in hentai But don't take my word for it. Just look at the commends on chapters..... And if that is not enough this is what other characters think of him "She just sees you as a pathetic idiot who would do anything if she just points her gun at you. She even called you a coward with who would never stand up for himself," <-- Thats the MC The only thing your story accomplished is make the readers FRUSTRATED it took WAY to long to change the mc I'm sure you lost most of your readers. Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐
I remember this premises from japanese novel somewhere - R***d his first love - Getting entangled with a criminal organisation ( the difference is the other one is a pure prostitution business while this one is a massive criminal organisation ) But this has a promising storyline if played correctly. I just hope that there will be no magic shenanigans whatsoever for this one Looking forward for the MC character development as the other novel had a such a dark "broken" MC but that's what made it such a good read
Just here to support author, good story and love the world building. At Least the way he gets into girls pants is believable, not like other novel where girl instantly falls for the MC. To people who think MC is a coward, what do expect from a normal high school student who was suddenly kidnapped and either choose between death and work for them. At least the way he reacts is in the realm of common sense.
I love this book so far. I picked it up a few days ago and it was the first in read. It has a good story and the characters are put in situations tgat make the book interesting to read. I am excited to see updates to this book because i can fully say that the author put alot of time and effort into writing it.
The premise is similar to Pure Love X Insult Complex, except not as dark. There is no NTR (netorare: where the girl is stolen from the MC), so that's a BIG plus. The MC is pretty average, except for his D, and he genuinely loves the girl, who reciprocates. He gets involved with a criminal organization by chance, but it seems he's developing more guts as he goes along. There are some frustrating parts because the MC has to deal with other character's BS, but the story hasn't progressed too far yet. I eagerly await his revenge! If you want other sources to read, check out the authors WordPress page or MachineSlicedBread, which I originally read it. Very well written!
De hecho, estoy leyendo esta novela, en la página principal, si Machine Slice Breadz, pero aunque venía aquí y lo calificaba. Como lo disfruto bastante, muy bonito. Claro que tiene sexo y todo, pero está enfocado en el sexo por lo que puedo ver. Y, afortunadamente, MC no es un pervertido, un cerebro que solo piensa con su basura y deja su cerebro apagado, todo el tiempo. Ver más