A good read! I found a lot of misspelling, grammatical errors, and punctuations; give a proofread and it will be more pleasing. :) I envy your way of writing action scenes, it left me on the edge as I read. The characters are vivid and feels like they are alive. It was a good dive!
When will be the next chapter? I want to read it as soon as possible.
Anyways, do check mine "Bright Claw: Emergence" #94 and drop a review. If you liked it then drop a support!! :D
