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DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered]

Author: Monster_Paradise
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zen_garden
zen_gardenLv4

๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿ‘Š

5yr

crywolfseven
crywolfsevenLv4

Youโ€™re off to a pretty good start just really hope you donโ€™t end up doing the whole harem route as that will always ruin a good story. Anyways thank you for your story and keep up the great work!

5yr
pan39
pan39Lv5

โ–‘โ–„โ–€โ–„โ–€โ–€โ–€โ–€โ–„โ–€โ–„โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘ โ–‘โ–ˆโ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–„โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–„โ–‘ โ–ˆโ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–„โ–„โ–‘โ–‘โ–ˆโ–‘โ–ˆ โ–ˆโ–‘โ–„โ–‘โ–ˆโ–€โ–‘โ–„โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–ˆ โ–ˆโ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–€โ–€โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–ˆ โ–ˆโ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–ˆ โ–ˆโ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–ˆ โ–‘โ–ˆโ–‘โ–‘โ–„โ–„โ–‘โ–‘โ–„โ–„โ–„โ–„โ–‘โ–‘โ–„โ–„โ–‘โ–‘โ–ˆโ–‘ โ–‘โ–ˆโ–‘โ–„โ–€โ–ˆโ–‘โ–„โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–ˆโ–‘โ–„โ–€โ–ˆโ–‘โ–„โ–€โ–‘ โ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘โ–€โ–‘โ–‘โ–‘

5yr
JimmyBlah
JimmyBlahLv14

Great grammar and spelling so far (which compared to 99% of the novels on this godforsaken app is amazing) Huge potential for the plot so far and no real qualms with any of the character interactions so far Great at explaining the system and abilities What can I say? This novel is pretty awesome! โœŒ๐Ÿผ

5yr
Beretta9
Beretta9Lv5

Yeah great start and system choice as it will be fun to see where it goes also hope this doesn't end up like most dbz stories that never get done or fast enough releases harem is ok but maybe only up to 3 so as to not side track much of the story but still have him making many next gen sayians on earth

5yr
Crook_Shank
Crook_ShankLv3

Itโ€™s a good pass time Fanfic until chapter 50s. After that, itโ€™s basically a cultivation novel one of the chinese wuxia thing. Clans and stuff you know.. So read it until chapter 53 and you can drop it.

4yr
PUJIT_FADTE_9415
PUJIT_FADTE_9415Lv3

IF AUTHOR IS STILL THERE THEN I WOULD REQUEST HIM TO CONTINUE PLEASE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

4yr
TonyTonyTard
TonyTonyTardLv1

I mean its decent but it Got to the point where i was reading this story just to laugh since its not the best but its still decent and i like long stories

3yr
tikller
tikllerLv4

Reveal spoiler

5yr
ChampionOfEternity
ChampionOfEternityLv3

I simply love it, sorry about that spammer who made 4 accounts just to down your reviews 4 times. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

5yr
AbsoluteCarnage
AbsoluteCarnageLv14

I really love this fanfic. By far one of the best DragonBall fan fictions on the Web novel Web site. This novel has great pace, great plot, great main character and original characters, and wonderful grammar. Keep it up author.

5yr
MarMarc
MarMarcLv10

I love this Fan-Fic and normally it has a good update speed but now after a long time Webnovel.com F*cks up and I can't read the latest chapter. (โ•ฌโ–”็šฟโ–”)โ•ฏ

5yr
chaosflame
chaosflameLv11

The english and grammar is poor, which intern makes the story feel choppy and hard to read. Obviously the stories updates are none or few and far between. But I will say that you do well with the characters and the world they live in.

4yr
Shuten
ShutenLv14

The system is stupid as hell. Dont like the mc personality. Mc got too much system point at the start of the story. Mc is in trouble let buy a new technique and kill the bad guy kinda ****. And the fights are boring as hell. Really hoped it would be good but its not for my liking.

4yr
GQuasar
GQuasarLv4

Good story, I can't wait for more chapters. ----------"-::'hxxhchfhhdcvvxbxbzb::-"-"-"-"-"-"--"-"-"-"-"-"-"-""--""-"-"-"-"-"-"-"--"-"-"'gdhdhdhdhdhdh

4yr
michael7022
michael7022Lv5

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Calintz20
Calintz20Lv7

Hope itโ€™s not dropped. โค๏ธ Hope itโ€™s not dropped. โค๏ธ Hope itโ€™s not dropped. โค๏ธ Hope itโ€™s not dropped. โค๏ธ Hope itโ€™s not dropped. โค๏ธ Hope itโ€™s not dropped. โค๏ธ Hope itโ€™s not dropped. โค๏ธ

4yr
Lordgrey
LordgreyLv15

I loved the story and characters and wish to continue reading but you have stopped updating it. everything I find a great or just good I find out that they have stopped writing it

1yr
Quarantinne
QuarantinneLv10

Writing Quality: The writing in this book is good, not too advanced. I would say, for those who use this school system, around eighth or ninth grade level. Itโ€™s a little below where I read at, but I donโ€™t mind. However it sometimes gets a little spotty, so 4 Stars. Writing Stability: Donโ€™t even get me started... As of now, 7/1/20, the stability is worse than dogsh*t. Hopefully it gets fixed, as the author promised. 1 Star Story Development: The development of the story is pretty good. Nothing too much to complain about, the only thing I would complain about, though, is the fact itโ€™s illogical to take in the two girls. 5 Stars World Background: As itโ€™s based on one of my more favorite animeโ€™s, I cant really fault the background much. Itโ€™s just... altered? kind of. 5 Stars Overall, I would say this book is a solid four, four and a half depending on the reader.

4yr
SlickTrick
SlickTrickLv14

I've got to say, this is really good and I hope it never get dropped. I wanna see MC having kids Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome

5yr