SkyLight
Definitely recommended to all those people who never read fan fictions. This one is totally different from the others. Exceptionally well written. Grammar and vocabulary on point. Read it even if you're not an ARMY! I came here prejudiced but it defenestrated all my prejudices. Everything from the characters to the set-up is amazing! Once you start reading you cannot stop....❤❤❤
This has always been one of my favorite BTS fan fictions—and it’s all because you feel like you’re reading a contemporary novel and not a piece involving BTS. The story develops wonderfully through realistic situations and I love watching the characters grow stronger together. I wish there was a sequel!
What can I say other then this is beautiful? Your words flow wonderfully. The emotions, the characters; they all feel so real. Kudos to you for that. Little to no grammatical mistakes, and the dialogue is well thought out of. Good usage of Korean tags for names(personally, I'm not too fond on using romanized Korean for certain things. it ends up being distracting. You don't see other novels with random pinyin scattered throughout, no?). Each character has their own quirks and behavior. They come to life. Namjoonie is as amazing as ever(the only president we need), and I feel like you portrayed him very well. Foreshadowing is there, and character motives and possible goals have been stated/shown. One thing I recommend is using more descriptions. Although, I can't say much myself. I feel like I use too much ;-; But descriptions aren't always of places. Describe what your character's senses are sensing. The rush of adrenaline, the pounding of feet on pavement. The silent(sometimes, not so silent)******* of two individuals who have a complicated history. I'm glad a novel like yours is here on Webnovel. Good luck, and continue writing!