Comments of chapter undefined of The Holy Chronicles of Baator

Good start just some ideas but Along with grayfia he should marry venelana (she’s just as hot and original wife), maybe use prestige for a political marriage to her and also marry grayfia by merging with Lucifer house to carry on both bloodlines of Lucifer via grayfia and gremory+bael bloodline (destruction) via venelanna, so that sirzech can be born since he’d be a great ally to have as a powerful son plus whatever kids he has with grayfia.

This is a first about a SI in Zeoti(fucks) body and pre Great War... (There are a lot of stories set during canon time and few set during The Devil Civil War)

i read sypnosis and dumped all my stones. just one request, dont let the mc be spineless and dont folows morals of the world instead make his own

Keep going please 🤩👌

Honestly, Venelana is so much better than Grayfia imo...I hope you stick with her instead.

nice

I loved!!!!!!!!

wow, so cool

Thanks for the amazing chapters!

thanks for the chapter

it was a bit confusing, MC shouldn't have acted like transmigration was his plan and we needed a bit of pre death background if elements of it were mentioned, but it sounds pretty interesting till now

Chysis is the mother of Zeo, the daughter of the ancestor Gremory (Runeas, also girl). So here the father must most likely be from the line of Lucifer. But... anyway 😉

Does he steal any sacred gears? Like the fallen angels tried with Asia?

Not a bad start. there is potential in this fanfic.

Better than those low tier trash.

First chapter is just so so 🙏🙏🙏 u don't like my comment Not praising like those other people delete it. But that's isn't gonna stop me from commenting how amateur u are mister insecure.

shouldnt he not already be married at 180yo, i mean noble heirs get engaged pretty early in dxd iirc...