ScarletBloodMoon
This **** is trash Mc wanna hide his personality when The previous Mc already forgot his memory everyone knows this whats the point in hiding it an then you got him hiding that he could do magic for no reason at all an then another turn off is wanting to make a portal to bring men to that world so dumb such a beta MC thats retarded so dumb most the time its just complaints about dumb stuff how to satisfy the world of woman like who cares you just woke up an now wanna take the frustrations of all woman pullin a naruto GARBAGE
Please try and pay attention to the tense of the words you use, some of your sentences are incomplete or too short. As well as some words are misspelled, but overall still understandable and thankfully your pronouns are good. When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido? Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More
I'll only sat this once but on the same day he wakes up not even 10 minets into it and he already starts raping his sister.And dident even care if he will die again.And coplains that he dosent want to go to that coprete orking hell he'll.But decided not to think rationally and to calm himself but to **** it and rape his suposed sister.He dident even think this is a new chance at life and I'll make the bomb shell of a sister mine but I need to know what's going on. Theres no of that. Only **** first think later.