ruijard1
very cringe novel, this is about a Saiyan god becoming a housewife and taking care of spoiled kids, a weak emotional Saiyan god who always gets triggered and emotional over everything, the MC is a snowflake who always rages and get nothing accomplished, poorly written story with no storyline, the Saiyan god become a housewife, that's the conclusion of the story, the MC is a bloated frog, all but intimidation and rage.
The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem
The story itself is good but the grammar needs some work here and there and there are some weird... Personality shifts in the MC for no reason even if he was a Saiyan. If u watched DB you would know how most Saiyans act so that needs some work as well. If this was rewritten with a little more work here and there it would be more popular. Just my opinion don't be roastin meh.
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Hmmm... I'm not sure if I should compliment this or criticize it. While in my opinion, it is good for most of the chapters as the MC's character is basically a scary man that turns into mush when with his family, and he very overprotective, sometimes I find that instead of a Family he's more like a slave and sometimes I don't think his family loves him that much as from what I can see, he's only getting s*x from Yasaka and nothing else such as them risking their lives or other emotional stuff like that. While I didn't mind this, others might cause who wants a slave for an MC, no one wants the person they're supporting to get controlled or manipulated. But while I say that it is good and there are parts that I don't mind, there is a part which I very much mind which is why I stopped reading the rest. The author from what I can see fucking changed the MC. I don't mean like change his personality or appearance, I mean like they got another character to be the MC, which is stupid in my opinion. If you want to have a different character as the MC make like a side story or another novel don't discard the original that we have come to know and love. That's all, while I do think it is good, stop when the chapter title says 'prologue', not the first prologue the second prologue which should be chapter 49, 48 or earlier.
I’m many chapters in but as a saiyan the number one thing he should be thinking of is fighting and there’s none of that in like 30 or more chapters. Plus while reading this I cringed too much because of dialogue. What ikki says is cringe as ****. But if you wanna try it you can still try it as we have different opinions.