Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn : Space Intelligent Woman

English is not your first language is it...your grammar and sentencing is awkward and off

Don’t take this the wrong way, but please get an editor. There are a lot of good stories that I had to let go because of bad grammar/ awkward sentence structures. I believe that there are others like me as well. I just can’t get fully immersed with the story if my brain keeps on correcting the errors. Praying for your future success.

so far so good. the only issue here is the grammar. it needs to be edited for it to be more coherent.

Yes yes give her more details so she can be back avoid your evil plans and torture u to death free of guilt

Oh yes I am looking forward to this. Just love reborn novels and space powers

I like the story author... Pls keep update.. 🙂😊

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grammar 😣😣

There are many grammatical errors :(

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Nice

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that was great

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I really love the plot development . The only issue is the grammar (spelling, verb) . Apart from that the story is really good 👍🏾

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