GidEros
The novel has some decent grammar and proper sentence building. But some sentences and phrases have some wrong grammars and spellings. Usage of punctuation marks properly should be reinforced author-kun, but the entirety of the content is good. Also author, you should give the MC's women some personality. Its kinda boring if all of them just acts the same around him. Other than that, write what you want to write, cause I'm feeling you are a fine man of culture.
This book has the sex scenes so far as I've seem among the novels that has some R-18 Content. In those scenes, the writing is so good and is more arousing than any other sex scenes of other R-18 Novels in this site. So take my 5 Stars. Also, thanks for giving me a new fetish author.....Clone Gangbang.....Yeah I really appreciate it.
Okay so i dont really know why the hell am i making a review in this particular story. To all of you who are reading, I AM PURE. π I just ran i to this and i really need to gain some stones/xp? Sooo uhm let me sing a song. *Coughs* *coughs* *adjusts microphone* "Sound check, 1.2.3." Deep breaths........... "Happy birthday to youuuuuu. Happy birthday to youuuuuuuu... Happy birthday happy birthdaaaaaaaayyyyyyy~ HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU~~" to the person reading this, i love ya man. Dm meπ
Wow, what a fantastic basted he is, he got a ring which can help him make multiple clone of his, now with that kind of superpower I can think of ton of ways to use this awesome power but he uses it so that he can **** multiple girls at a time. No morale boundary he **** his mother, aunt, friends mother, sister's what not.
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