This os the progress report for so far:
-1. In-depth description of abilitys and abilitys are original.
-2. Character depth: Medium, the characters are above the 2d line but a lottle below 3d. Most likely will get better over time.
-3. Spelling/Grammar: Almost no mistakes, and the few that are there are generally unnoticed or minor things that dont effect the quality of writing.
All 5/5 for me, and most likely I won't change that.
