Comments of chapter undefined of Part-Time Star, Full-Time Dad

Indeed Theodore's character in this chapter are way too out of line in how you build him up... The only notable excuse for this is the side effect of his beast training but that is a poor excuse as unless what was shown so far as Theo is but a facade (meaning he's a @sshole in his core) even if we say he along with what called role playing...he's just way too out of character... Maybe the build up for such is not enough to introduce such side of Theo... Anyway, go with your own designs author as after all we readers would only say that something is off but it is still your story. Thanks for the chapter

this chap wasnt very good the change in character for mc was just unbelievabley weird. also he would never **** infront of his daughter mybe if u built him up to be like this it couldve worked but it didnt

thanks for chap! Some people are not liking the change in character but its fine with me just make sure you make some excuses for him getting agressive thats all I will read either way.

I didn't get past the first two paragraphs and I skipped the lot of it, which means I skipped d whole chapter. That was a sh*t ton of cringe n sudden departure from mc's depicted character, I mean he did that stuff with his daughter in d same room, really? smh

holy sweet Jesus, that was just something else entirely, pretty good author!

A S&M game is good.... He as a dominant and all, but i sincerly hope that Rose isn't in the room, if i can remember right, she was with Bella plaiyng on her own room, so, ok, and if u guys skipped the other r-18 or didn't remember, Theo was pure dominant from the start.... And for the luck, Mary is a subimissive that is all horny for him

I love how you split the story between a single father raising his daughter and harem. It's a fun ride. Thanks for the chapter.

I loved when he shocked the world with Despacito but this please never do this again we are reading a novel with a dad and you just nearly succeeded in ruining the work you have done so far..... I will try to forget this chapter so as to maintain his previous image in my mind....

please update

Merry Christmas Author-Kami

The one time we get a longer chapter and it's just smut.

are they doing a role play? Theo is too out of his character like he is a new one. just read the previous one and this one they are different with same names Mary too we knew she was somewhat M but didn't think it was like this........… thanks for the chapter by the way

Oooooh pero que riko

Thanks for the chapter .

Thanks for the chapter.

i want more ch like this with her

My be his power knows what the lady want and act accordingly, this was my everything

thanks for the chapter

are you stopping this book too?