The Immortal Player

don't u just love unpredictability in story development tied with character growth cause Mann. I just hope many chapters are released in quick succession cause the waiting Is agonising[img=update]

Interesting story so far I do recommend it. The writing quality is not bad only a little rough in a couple of places. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I find this novel enjoyable to read, with lots of plots and ever growing characters. Even certain characters personalities have changed dramatically. Great Job RDREAM!

I enjoy reading this story :) Thanks for writing it! It is interesting development of the story plot. I hope to see how it develops further ahead.

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Pretty good read. V. V. V b v v v b vvvvvv.

I like the setting, biased filino review, but the novel is great , worth waiting for updates I recommend this if you like game novels and stuff

I kinda interested to read more, the story line is good, but some parts feels a bit weird for me, I think you can do better in character development, I won't say anything about grammar thing because it's my weak point too lol

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Good story. Just need to improve the grammar....👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Really enjoying this so far. Worth a read. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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i wanted to give this an 2nd try but i just can't get past the 2nd ch, an OP skill right at the start of the game... i mean when i first see the title of this novel i though he's going to *build* a character that's tankey with lifesteal or some kind of sustain to keep the character alive but nooo. just give the MC an OP skill at start of the game and f it to everything else. an point that alot of author make a mistake is that this is an *video game*. And theirs something call balanced. you don't make some very questionable *Easter egg* type thing in the game and just give out OP thing for basically free. this is a big turn off for a lot of people(me included)

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