Golden Dawn (Naruto X Justice League)

Ok now that I’ve read quite a bit of this I’ve changed the way I see this fan-fic. I like it, it was difficult to get past some parts as naruto was naive or it felt like the mc was belittled compared to other dc characters. If you get past the first couple chapters its pretty good.

MC irritates me for more chapters than I usually will read. there is some character growth at a plausible rate of development I suppose. imagination is used at different points in the fanfic...

Great read hope you keep updating this and do not drop please. . . .

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great fanfic romance is done well character growth is on point a bit slow paced but okay all in all a very good fic highly recommended from me ...👍

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I don't know i just passing by But dude u should put some extra work on dialogue like for real but yeah i will just give u 5 star because some people that gave u a low rate but no reason

Umm i want to write my review but it seems many has the same point with me so ijust rate without reason pls forgive me up up up up up up up up up

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Yeah yeah i know the character emotion and tge dialog seems blank but the author still improving (right author) and this is hella good ff and some people just low rated this stoey without have a solid reason lol ay just remove the low rate if theres no reason

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it's really good, just isn't my preferable kind of MC but it's a good read so I highly recommend it if you are looking for an interesting DC and Naruto fanfic

The storyline is too slow. boring Naruto too restrained might be suitable if it was Sasuke or Itachi maybe you are short on ideas you have to make Naruto give all his strength

I love it, and the fact that you change the nature of naruto gradually is also very believeable and how much his naivety is an anomaly among shinobi meant to be killers, as the league members know from their demeanor the difference between naruto and his mother kushina. A great story

LOVE THE CONCEPT, LOVE THE CHARACTERS, BUT THE GRAMMAR AND INTERACTION AND CHARACTER DIALOGUE WAS HARD TO READ OTHER THAN THAT YOU HAVE A GOOD WORK

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