Comments of chapter undefined of Legendary Golden Apple Tree

Phew. That was long. World-building is not easy. *shivers* And this is the entire backstory yeah? I wonder if parts here will surface after Marwa has become a tree 🤔

Wow! You are really good at writing. Better than me. [img=recommend]

My, my, It really was a goooooood chapter!!! Sigh I wish I could write that much words too... But I loved the first chapter. I will be continuing the story. (✿^‿^)

Amazing

It is a very satisfying beginning. Totally enjoyed it

Woahhh-I have not even readin the first 300 words and they are *cough cough* naked-Indeed- a special beginning

Why must his life end so soon. I was hoping for more love scene. Keepup the good work! <3

A satisfying beginning.. Keep I up..👍

Demon King LordFinn! No more Little! Shamans and totems and deserts? Interesting combination. Oh, his body got split in half. Just another poor death for another poor protagonist here on WN. Good start with a cliffy! Keep it up, LordFinn! >3</

That was awesome!! I wasn’t really into this kind of novel, but I like this LordFinn and ill be waiting for updates. That is long. I thought ill get bored reading it. But its quite intense. Love it 😍😍

The story seems to have a good thing going for it. I would rather you wrote it out and developed the story without any rush. I understand that this is for the competition, but I would really enjoy if I could read the smaller scenes in this chapter in more detail. As you know, I love words and how you can use them to weave a story. I think with practice you will soon master it. You have great potential. Best of luck in the contest!

So gooooood Marvaaaaa earth God becomes an Apple tree. Liked the first chap. You r good finnny~

Thanks for the chap! Just goes to show how stupid people are to believe in love and all that bull! Also he didn't want to be immortal without the girl?! What an idiot!