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This is a pretty good story so far. Its could prove to be a very interesting one. But does the MC not know anything about the MU and MCU? If not its pretty weird but then again its an interesting take on the story.
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Freaking amazing! This story leaves me wanting more for each page and now thar i stopped reading, I cant stop thinking about future outcomes and possibilities. Havint Tony Stark as your overprotective brother is brilliant. I hope you dont give up this book Author-sama.
Awesome story man. I love the story and please continue the story 💯👊👌🤘😌😎🤩👍😤🥳👻😋😝🤑🤓😜😇😆😁🥰😍😘😊😛😀😃😄🔰😉😂🤣✌😭👝☺😛😀😃😄💕❤😇😜🤓🤑😝😋👻🥳😤😌😎🤩👍💯🤘👌👊💯
You need a proof reader badly, so many grammar mistakes, you repeatedly call male characters she and her, get someone that is a native english speaker to read your work before posting, it'll help a lot.
its got potential. slow start not to slow hopefully I hate 140 character restriction . mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmdumb.
Awesome story author 🤩🤩🤩🤩😆😆😆😁😁😁 please do a mass release 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 or more chapters since there are only 9 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙇🏻♀️🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I ran straight through without stopping. I'm definitely looking forward to more. I like the fact that you have them starting off as a baby and as he grows up he become a carefree child. Awesome start. Im waiting for more.
It's a good story and a better fan fiction than others here you really are good in writing. I wanna ask you to how to get inspiration like this so I can also write the stories or fan fiction
A pity you stopped writing, the story was starting to get good ....................................................................... ............................
I like the story flows especially that I like marvels... I even watch every marvels that was released... I hope the author will continue updating this story and won't drop this... For this story was good and interesting...
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I expected the story to be a bit different but my expectations are yet to be met. I'm guessing it's coz it's still in development but hopefully the writer will do good. So far I'd say it still needs some work
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