TrueDawn
Dude, why did you write entire chapter about fight between Felix, Rosalia and Eleanor? If I understand Rosalia and Felix have only to buy little time for Argentum making something way more important so there's no point in describing their fight. It would be enough to write something about effects of their fight. For example showing Felix and Rosalia lying on the ground because Eleanor is so strong only due to her anger or describing at the end their bodies as strangely hurt and damaged.
the best reason i could give was because i wanted to warm myself up to get back into writing. and well, the best way to do was the good old fight scene. my apologies if it felt like the fight took a long time, but you know how it is for fights involving strong people. fights involving those guys only last for a minute or so while being hella long.
IgorKiel:Is that because you wanted to show Felix and Rosalia skills?