TrueDawn
Dude, why did you write entire chapter about fight between Felix, Rosalia and Eleanor? If I understand Rosalia and Felix have only to buy little time for Argentum making something way more important so there's no point in describing their fight. It would be enough to write something about effects of their fight. For example showing Felix and Rosalia lying on the ground because Eleanor is so strong only due to her anger or describing at the end their bodies as strangely hurt and damaged.