Reviews of The Story of Dusk
The Story of Dusk
jikanyotomare
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I am shamelessly give 5 stars for my own work, because I love it. ^^ Please noted. If you looking for story with perfect grammar, then this is not for you. I am trying to improve my English. So, it is very possible for you to find grammatical error. But, for you who read it. I just want to say "Thank you so much for read this story. ^^"
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After I've read the author other works...It truly makes me to give off a great impression that this would be another fun and great novel to read without getting out of boredom. It truly amaze me and the same time thrilled on how the story plot develop connecting to the other latest novel in the other hand...It simply do amaze and excite me to read it more......Thanks for this lovely work, author-sama...Keep up your good work...💞💞💞💞👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖
This is the prequel to Purple Dawn Till Dusk, which I have not read yet, though I understand it should be able to stand on its own. Due to my personality if there is a sequel or set of stories, I prefer to start from the beginning or prequel to get an idea as what story the author wants to tell its reader/s. So for now after reading 9 chapters, I can give it a 4 as it introduces key characters which is likely to have impact on Senja's future. I like what I'm reading so far, but got a little bit confused in some parts of it. What I'm concerned about it is the transitioning of one story to the next, how will that happen?
I am not super adept at reviews, but I shall do my best. This novel is related to Purple Dawn till Dusk, pretty much like a prequel except that it gives the readers an understanding and a background to the former Senja. Purple Dawn brings up events that is not explained in the novel, so I am hoping that this one would explain it, especially the "saving the Kingdom three years ago" event. 😅 Also, I want to know what happened to Senja in that one year disappearance. ^^ The author's writing slowly improves because if you read PD till Dusk, you would see how much the author improves in word usage and grammar. It isn't perfect and still has some issue with word usage, but it's the author's way of getting better. Updates are at one chapter a day. I am still confused about the world background and I still need some insight in the characters especially the main ones. :) But well, give the novel a try and hope you enjoy.
Reading this because of the event. This would get a higher review from me if it had a decent editor. Translation is hard, writing is hard. But an editor would help fix all the grammar mistakes. They are so frequent that it is a distraction trying to read the story. If I didn't need minutes read for the event I wouldn't have continued as far in as I have.
**JUST READ IT** it has become my second favorite after the same author's another one. Check it out too. These kind of story is hard to come by. I really like the bond between xiao brothers, especially qianru. I love how the relationship develops with jun and qianru ❤❤❤ Thank you author.. Im really glad that i found your stories.. I mean it ..
Updates: 5 Writing and World: 4 each Story and Character: 3 each Overall: 3.8 The writing is understandable, but there are still frequent grammatical errors that mess up the flow of reading for me. So, I suggest getting a proofreader that’s knowledgeable about proper sentence and verb construction. I had some difficulty grasping the world and the feuds that were currently going on. Some background passages on what’s happening in this world would clear this up greatly. The world info bits are currently scattered through these first three chapters, but they don’t connect/flow in an easy, coherent big picture. Way too many characters in the beginning. I couldn’t keep up unfortunately nor could I connect or grasp any of them very well individually. I’d say stick to no more than 3 characters for the first 3 chapters, and then you can add more. If you need all of them, then again with the background passages mentioned earlier, explain how they all fit into the current events and their relationships to one another beforehand. Once a solid foundation is established, then continue this piece by piece info bit strategy. But for the beginning chapters, this strategy makes it confusing actually. Lastly, this’ll also help the visualization of the action scenes which were interrupted by info bits on their relationship or current struggle in the world. In short, this just needs some grammar brush ups, organization and trimming, and then the story is good to go!
