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TL;DR Don't waste your time. Grammatically better then I was expecting although nothing praiseworthy. High frequency of updates but inherently short chapters. What ruins this is the nonsensical story. The completely butchered timeline, unbelievable characters and interactions straight up make me want to bang my head into the wall. Repeatedly.
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Really one of the ****ear fan fic on the site and if you disagree then go and get a check up I am really concerned for young Hbohglkhb kybiygihgiyf
The MC without any devil fruit pissed off two yonkos and escape but then he gets multiple devil fruits and becomes way to evil but not a good evil... it’s like the author is forcing it way to much and after he got the devil fruits he became sooooooooo weak it’s pathetic. Waste of time don’t read
The writing quality is good. But the story development is very weird no explanation in my aspect things. Time skips in wrongs times. Anyway I had to drop. Hope for the best Aurthor don’t get disappointed I just my personal opinion. Thank you.
It had potential but for an op Mc he was so full of himself that it made him week. For someone who knows the story(Mc). He is an idiot and at times just doesn’t really dumb stuff. But looks like it has been dropped so I wouldn’t waste your time here
First is this harem or not? 5 star for ONE PIECE FICTION! I look at all review and wow all good, so im gonna support it too. Hope its not dropped in the middle!!
I have enjoy read this one piece fan novel thank you Aurthor. Do not mind what people say and just write it please don't drop please dont drop!!!! ❤❤❤
Best one piece fanfic wish it lasted longer.
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The storyline is awesome. There is finally an MC that doesn’t want to join Luffys crew, or take his crew. MC is ruthless and the story has pretty good humour.
Not very good not very bad. Characters are a bit annoying to get use to. The MC doesn't act his mental age most of the time and takes away the whole SI feel.
The best One Piece Fan Fic I read so far (only 4), my real only complaint is that the MCs become way too powerful quickly, already haki and devil fruit... (>\/\&///\/\&&)+)&)&)&/)&)&&//)&//)///)&/))))^&&&&
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Hye. First of all I want to congratulate the author for such a wonderful fanfic of one piece. Its far better than any fanfic that I had read before. I really want to gift this novel but sadly I can't. So after this I will vote with power stone to support the author. Story development is good and I love with how the author design the character such as Mark Z. Mattheus. If there is any way maybe I can support the author please do tell. If it is within my power, I will definitely support you💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻
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Not my cup of tea. It is way too fast paced and the characters are flat with nonsensical aims and reasons for their actions. From what I've read the novel is simply poor and I can't review it highly. I would however recommend it to anyone who just wants a fluff story with lots of chapters to read. But anyone who wants to actually read a novel should steer clear.