Comments of chapter undefined of DxD: Hero of Wrought Iron

Nice chapter Though I have a question will he be able trace sacred gear's I mean emiya did managed to copy Excalibur and he did that in the type moon world so imagine what can he do in the dxd world And please don't make him join any peerage it a slave system and if he inherited emiya memories he should kow what its fells to be a slave

i think you should give him the noble phantasms of shirou amakusa tokisada, right arm evil eater and left hand xanadu matrix, it will let him learn all sorts of magic by linking it to the existing thaumaturgy foundations of dxd like white magic ,norse magic, spirit magic, fairy magic etc. Can't he buy them from shop

if he's going to have a harem they all should be unique IAM sick and tired of characters being overused like rias , Sona , serafall .... all IAM saying characters like Gabriel, artmies , Lavinia (Vali big sister), yasaka, are overlooked and if he got all of archer memoirs he should be capable of summoning heroic spirit's since archer as counter guardian has been to multiple timelines so he know or at least learned the summoning ritual and we all know that the the throne of Heroes exist outside of time and space so he's technically capable of summoning them and come on imagine Arthur recation to lancer artoria and Azazel meeting DaVinci , Blackbeard' meeting the breast dragon emperor , okita meeting dxd okita ,yasaka meeting tamamo , karna meeting his father, king Hassan scaring the **** out of God's like Zeus and Low key ,

Okita bro, Nice Book If you continue this it will surely be one of the best books. Don't rush making mc level up, always make him on same level as enemy or a bit stronger? Sometimes even weaker, For the sake of trill and enjoyable fights in future. Also a request from a fan, don't bash please, especiall rias, let Issei have most of his original harem. If you plan to give mc a harem then you can make it [Sona, Tsubaki, Ravel, Rossweisse, Serafall, Yasaka, and Kuroka.] Issei still get to have [Rias, Asia, Akeno, Koneko, Xenovia, Irina, kunou.] 7 for each, equal harem number. And take it slowly. Make arcs a little detailed to make them longer. You can do what you want like making him stay human and get the titles Strongest Human/Heavenly Emperor/Sword Incarnation/. . . Most people ignore titles but anime like DxD characters that are considered as powerhouse got a title/alias/nickname. Look at Vasco Strada [Violence of Heaven] Dulio [Joker/Heaven trump card] sirzechs [Destruction Incarnation. . . ] This are some examples, this is most of what I want to say just remember to try slow down the pace of events. Aslo don't make way too broken, develop romance slowly (you don't have to try and write h-scene, it is your choice to do them or not).

Okita bro, Nice Book If you continue this it will surely be one of the best books. Don't rush making mc level up, always make him on same level as enemy or a bit stronger? Sometimes even weaker, For the sake of trill and enjoyable fights in future. Also a request from a fan, don't bash please, especiall rias, let Issei have most of his original harem. If you plan to give mc a harem then you can make it [Sona, Tsubaki, Ravel, Rossweisse, Serafall, Yasaka, and Kuroka.] Issei still get to have [Rias, Asia, Akeno, Koneko, Xenovia, Irina, kunou.] 7 for each, equal harem number. And take it slowly. Make arcs a little detailed to make them longer. You can do what you want like making him stay human and get the titles Strongest Human/Heavenly Emperor/Sword Incarnation/. . . Most people ignore titles but anime like DxD characters that are considered as powerhouse got a title/alias/nickname. Look at Vasco Strada [Violence of Heaven] Dulio [Joker/Heaven trump card] sirzechs [Destruction Incarnation. . . ] This are some examples, this is most of what I want to say just remember to try slow down the pace of events. Aslo don't make way too broken, develop romance slowly (you don't have to try and write h-scene, it is your choice to do them or not).

You could put the HP and Mana as a percentage. This way he knows how much mana or hp he has left while fighting or training. Loved the start of your story. It was well written. good luck 😉 Also do you plan on creating a discrord server if your serious about this fanfic since it does have potential ?

I recommend only giving levels and stats to the MC and monsters that spawn in his ID’s. If normal people have HP it will complicate things a lot. Having MP or other energy levels is normal and can be measured. But stats don’t work the same way on people as they do an game characters. So if you want other people to have levels don’t include HP, and levels don’t mean how strong they are. Because a level 1 with a strong sacred gear would insta kill people much stronger. Plus some people have super high skill but low stats.

i think he is compatible with dxd norse magic and nasuverse rune magic. He should buy rune stone from the shop regarding both and learn them

Hopefully we see some supernatural bashing, especially devils, hope he’s pro human

I have a question with his item contraction will it disappear after some time? Also is the MC the counter guardian for the DXD world? 🤔

thanks for the chapter

I really like how you made it hard to level skills and gain stats. It’s more balanced that way.

Thanks for the chapter.

cool waiting for the prod

when will there be another chapter?

more please

Exp

can he get elemental sight by putting enough points in sense, after all as mentioned in the wiki theoritically any magi can get it if he improves his ability to perceive information

Author, please make a footnote about the level of power in this story. And then with an average of 5 units and a strength of 90 units, this MC somehow took off a lot. I doubt even Vasco Strada has that much power.