Comments of chapter undefined of Chairman of The Magic Council
Chairman of The Magic Council
akikan40
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Well It is hard to even comment on all the bullshit I have just read. First, Bourne protecting Karen when she’s clearly the bitch here because of what? I don’t see a reason for him to protect her the way she’s doing. Second, he can lie to the Spirit King concerning something that happened to a celestial spirit? Is the title Spirit King a joke to you? Third, he wants to kill Loke because he stayed in the world just to protect Aries from being tortured under the excuse that he endangered Karen’s life when clearly she’s the one that went on the mission even when she knew she was weakened. Be honest with us Akikan, were you High or drunk when you wrote this? You’re still on time to delete it, just this chapter can take this novel from the sky to the underworld
yeah bro please change it. I have not read the original manga/anime of fairy tail but reading the comments I checked wiki of Karen and the spirit so yeah bro if this novel was like manipulative/evil MC this would have been okay although I personally would not have read that type of novel. He's a celestial spirit king for a reason so I don't think you can fool him so easily and on other hand kings personality is a bit just too good man I don't think you should do this with him. Your MC was originally a smart, sly and neutral in nature but I believe in order to add members to his harem you changed his character a bit just too much. He's also becoming a hypocrite when you consider he hates dark guilds and yet is doing nearly the same thing.
I will have to read next chapter before deciding to drop this. My interest was already dwindling but there was way too much bullshit in this chapter. MC can torture kill the bad guys for all I care but doing this to those who are innocent and kind just because he doesn't know them is dropping the likeability of MC. Yeah he did something pretty crazy for Ur but doing this for Karen doesn't make any sense. She is already saved and won't die. And seeing him fooling Spirit King was just painful to read. That sh*t doesn't even make sense. He is the m*therfuking Spirit King and he knows what his people are going through. The only reason he punished Loke in the cannon was because by indirectly causing Karen's death , he broke some sacred code of the Celestial spirits. That's why he was banished to human world until he disappears.
Thanks for the chapter. After reading the chapter and the comments makes me asking does anyone watching lawyer movies or series or reading an story about lawyer with some government lawyer against victim or criminal lawyer? If I remember correctly Bourne was asked to protect karen to be alive by bob and Bourne answering that as he want to clearing his debts for freezing incident and taking him, ur, ultear away and then as CEO of magazine industry he doesn't want his ambassador model to die when she is still working with him as model. If karen die before he fired her from his company then there will be rumors saying that working as his ambassador and model mysterously being killed and no one will work with him after that and so he must make situation that achieve that condition. He making a plan with protecting karen alive until she back to the guild and then making celestial spirits court anul karen from using celestial key or golden Zodiac key while maintaining the relation between celestial spirits and human beings as peaceful as he can so he asking the judge as compensation to annul karen spirit contract. If the judge annulled with the report of leon then that mean she will be banned to use any celestial spirits key. But if you ask as compensation to the judge with different reason that can win against the leon report as in his anger with karen abusing and torturing aries, Karen will lose the contract with those two (Leo and aries) only or maybe prohibited karen use any zodiac key or golden celestial spirits key or high tier celestial spirits summoning. As in lucy heartfilia of luffy heartsomething explain about celestial spirit summoner that there is many celestial spirits key out there she can summon with the requirements of the what kind of key he or she got and she always mentioned that the strongest and legendary key is the golden key who can summon Zodiac spirits who also has high consumption of the contractor magic or spirits and so she explain the silver key to summon plue (celestial spirits or pet from rave master manga) an dog who nose like dirll and always having tremors with super sweat as all celestial spirits has tier or rank or caste. Sorry if my comment was too long and so confused. At least you get the gist of what I Mean and English is not my mother language.
Idk if this ever came up before but are you going to include juvia into the little harem which I hope won't be huge. I don't wanna be mean to Grey but Bourne is basically the same as juvia that they control the weather and turn into water, I hope you can compensate Grey somehow but its just rambling on my part. Thanks for the chapter 🤩
