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Is this harem btw good fanfic
the story is great and has lot of potential. but i hope that you will correct the grammar and spelling errors because it was destroying the mood of the story and sometimes i dont understand some parts of it. but overall its great. just edit and correct what was wrong and everything will follow.
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I would give 5 ⭐️ but the tag says reincarnation but from what I have read it shows nothung that signifys reincarnation minus that instead if one Kushina and Minato had two kids
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I have to say you have good storyline and i like it. But the grammar mistakes will ruin your book. Bet it remind me of my self because English is not main language .i hope you will improve and make books read by many. I will love to be editor but my job demand a lot of time. I hope you will find a good editor that will help you in the future
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Gracias por escribir esta novela me gustó mucho el personaje y esperó que no terminé en harem que ya está muy gastado esperó más capitulos^_^^_^
My only complaint is the English quality. It seems like one of two things. 1. English is not your first language 2. You don't read through what you write to make sure it actually makes sense There are so many simple mistakes and it makes reading this really difficult. The story is really creative but please go over your content before you post.
Another one of those novels with poor grammar and lots of typos but great story. Been enjoying the novel so far. Keep it up author, and gad damn try to edit your chapters.
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