Love this book, would be 5 stars if it updated tho, but I guess author wants a break from this book.
Firstly ddduuudeeeeeee you know that u have a spiderman story going right??????? Please update it. UPDATE AUTHOR ,READERS NEED UPADATES. U CAN'T MESS WITH READERS DIALY CHAPTER DOSE AND GET OFF THE HOOK THAT EASILY.UPDATE NOWWW . WE LOVE SPIDERMAN OR BROLY OR THEIR FUSION. UPDATE THE STORY ULTIMATE PETER PARKER.
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Honestly im liking this story very much. A new spin on an old story. If you like DBZ youll like this. Give it a read i promise it wont disapoint. Tho it only has 11 chapters. Alot happens and the chapters have good length to them to.. Just hope author keeps posting chapters... Otherwise ill have to go all God Of Destruction on him
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Love it. I just can't wait for the next chapter. Best fan fiction I've read in a while. Good character development. The only thing I would have loved was that the power level wasn't evolved like crazy
This is the first story I've ever read in Webnovel, though there's never been an update since last year. Are you alright? Because we're really looking forward to seeing you in the future.
My only complaint is no update and no info for 2 months now and it was just getting to the good part. The english is great, plot is getting thicker by the second, and the cross over was s very good one too. Hope we see an update soon.
It has been over a year, so I guess it's not coming back ever again ------------------------------------R.I.P-------------------------------------
great story about the middle of the night and I was in the middle of the night and I was in the middle of the night and I was in the middle of the night and I was
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One of the best fan fictions I have ever read, and i wasn't even a fan of dragon ball one I started reading this............................
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es una de las mejores novelas que lei respecto al genero... no es perfecta... pero entretiene.........no abusa del haren...y lomejor de todo sabe como fluir la historia
10/10 a little rocky in the early parts but this is really freakin awsome!!! 10/10 a little rocky in the early parts but this is really freakin awsome!!! 10/10 a little rocky in the early parts but this is really freakin awsome!!! 10/10 a little rocky in the early parts but this is really freakin awsome!!!
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