The Birth of a Monster (The First Vampire I)

I rarely ever rate a novel 5/5 stars if you look at my past comments it's useually harsh as frick but this novel ... It's perfect to be sold at a bookstore or online as a actual book one that sells out Plot line- thick with detail and drama World building- holy heck there's alot Character depth- so much it feels like I'm reading about real people This novel is worth your stones your votes and your love read it

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Story is insanely good I would recommend to anyone looking for something a bit dark and out of the norm as it stands now at 34 chapters it’s just picking up and is a perfect time to get in.

Actually impossible to put down once you start reading it. The writing is excellent and the world building it's done is fantastic. The characters and plot are unique and it doesn't follow many of the frustrating tropes youd find in a novel with vampires. Absolutely a must read novel, especially if you like vampires or high fantasy.

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Great novel ,concentrated on world building and story telling ,very fluid ,but there is a clear hostility toward combact encounters ,they are few and short and allaways and with something bad happening , the author doesn't seem to like them ,which is a shame cince even if short they are all quite epic ,their end is always kind harsh ,which stops you from enjoying them

neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp please make more chapters this book is so good.

It’s an amazing albeit dark story about a boy who was forced to chafe into something other than human and his journey. The character design is amazing and deep. The POV changes sometimes which gives you a whole new perspective in the story, often making the story much deeper and more meaningful. It’s not everyday that you find a masterpiece like this. I really recommend it!!

If a dumbass main character is your thing, this story will be your cup of tea. If not move on. But be warned, he gets worse as the chapters go by...….. nothing more to say, except I cant believe I wasted my time on this sh*t.

This is an astoundingly good novel, one of the best things I have read in a while, but for those want a transmigrated instantly all powerful dark overlord type, than this is not for you. The main character starts out as a vulnerable, scared child. One who makes mistakes and struggles to embrace his power. Not just Rassa (Mc), but all of the characters grow and change in this fabulously thought out world. Totally worth a read.

A hidden gem. This deserves so much more. Its probably the best vampire bool i wver read. I would definately recommend giving it a try to anyone!!!!!

Still one of the best novels i have yet to read on here, and i have read many. The story is fantastical and magical, its deep with plenty of information as if any question you have will be answered. It's a new approach to an older genre that feels original in its own way. Its elegant without being pretentious. No character introduced so far has felt misaligned with the story as if everyone has had some effect on where the MC is and is going. I look forward to seeing this story bloom and will stick with it till its very ending. Please never stop creating, Jelim, what you have is a gift that deserves to make its mark on the world.

I love how you put part 1 and part 2 in the same book not a lot of people would do that tbh it makes it easier to read and to go back if needed so much easier as well. Your doing a great job keep up the good work. The only thing I don't like is waiting for new chapters lol but that's only cuz the book it sooooo good.

Dropping this review right here to show my love and support for this novel. By far the best novel I've read in this site.Story is insanely good I would recommend to anyone looking for something a bit dark.

If you are looking for a dark fantasy story that does not deal with reincarnation, look no further. Dropping this review to support the author. + second volume coming soon! Read now while it's hot!

This is an excellent story that I have enjoyed tremendously. You can feel that this was not written haphazardly but instead with care and passion that the writer had for the characters and story. I gave the story 4 stars for world development only because this is still the beginning of the story and I feel like there is still so much out there left to tell us. I hope you keep up the good work and dont let us wait to long to see how you continue to polish the characters and reveal to us the gems they become.

I just really like this book. The action, story, character development and the making of a monster are all elements that make this an incredible work of art worth reading. P.s.: Author please make your chapters just a tad bit longer...

Love this story, a really refreshing take on the vampire 'formula?' and its great. Best original I've found on the site since Jay Aslan stopped getting posts.

This novel is extremely enjoyable. The author knows where he wants to go with his characters and you can feel it. While some complained about the MC at the beginning, I feel like it's necessary for him to be like this so that we can observe his transformation. The world describes appears to be quite interesting and I can't wait to discover it along with you. Anyway, keep up the good work, you're really good at it.

It's a nice novel . I like it's development and the plot is great. I've read the chapters at least twice and I enjoyed reading it even on the second time . 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖😍😍😍😍😍