Reviews of Adventuring in Pokémon

this is the worst story ever, I mean, at this rate you might as well give Ace a poke ball that can hold a unlimited amount of pokemon or while your at it just give him a mew two with a infinity gauntlet or give him a Lv. 100 Arces that can destroy a mountain with a sneeze

I love the story so far and I hope you continue as I think it can serve to be a amazing novel and has potential to get high in the ranking. ..................