Reviews of Peerless Doctor: The Rise of a Phoenix
Peerless Doctor: The Rise of a Phoenix
chonnie
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Some people are going to be disgusted that I'm rating my own novel five stars (cough one of my best friends definitely is), but if I don't shamelessly support myself, who will? Don't worry, this is probably the only time I'll be doing this. The number one reason why you guys get updates late is because I'm always calling my writing trash. In the six months, I have fallen in love with Eastern fantasy. The genre has rekindled my desire to tell my own stories, so here it is. Full disclosure, this novel began as a joke. It was meant to be a parody of sorts to the usual female cultivation novels I tend to read. This was meant to be my side project, but it became the story I could not stop writing about. Fantasy is my favorite genre. I love how the world shifts in accordance with the author's imagination. With the cultivation, it's a little more structured. This helps me a lot since my writing here on Webnovel is for my learning stages. When this first draft is completed, one day I would like to rewrite this with a magic system based on cultivation with a little more tweaks. Romance, on the other hand, is a subplot that I believe can add on to a novel in so many ways. My issue with most of the things that I read is that the romances are toxic. There are cases of dubious consent between characters, no matter the gender. Sometimes there is harassment or abuse that comes in the form of courtship. That will not be the case in my novel. The MC and ML are both individuals with their own goals and aspirations. They are not there as embellishments to the other. They are not perfect by any means. They are human, and I'm excited for you all to see how their love comes to be. My biggest goals are to create a plot that keeps you, the reader, engaged and to form characters that you will one day remember with fondness. This will be a journey of many authors notes and edits, but I would be honored to have you come along for the ride.
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Writing, Updates, World: 5 Story, Character: 4 Although the story is slowly building up to something big, it hasn't yet reached that gripping point which really hooks readers at least plot-wise. This has many of the same events familiar to transmigration stories, but what makes this stand out is its writing of it. Beautiful writing with good detail, vocabulary, and description. It's not any plain, old, typical webnovel quality, but stylistic writing of the Author's. MC's are hard to make well, and I have a good impression of this one. The FL isn't weak nor arrogant/brash. The Prince, while short on his encounter, also doesn't come off as completely annoying or power hungry. The rest of the characters have yet to make a substantial impact or come across distinctively, but this is only the beginning, and I think we will have that very soon. This story is still building its foundations, and it has done it very well. At this point, the most enjoyable point would be the writing which immerses one into the world and story. But I imagine soon, the plot and character development also will really shine. Great work!
Pretty cool story with some realism added to cultivation. This story isn't so much about leveling up, rather something of a discovery journey at this stage. I'm not really clear on the story's purpose or stakes, but this is a slow burner that gradually reveals as it goes. It's all good. The key characters are nicely written. Aside from grammar slips, the storytelling is easy with a good reading flow. I didn't have to back track. Looking forward to seeing how the story continues to unfold.
I chose this story to read on a whim because I enjoy reading reincarnation/transmutation novels and I'm so glad I started reading it. The story development is the perfect balance and makes it hard to put down your phone because I want to know what happens next instead of getting a full night of sleep.
This book is awesome. Language is good. Applause to the author's awesome writing styles. The MC is well written same goes to its other characters, though not all. I can see that author is a hardworking person and take other's critique and suggestions realy well. That's why as the chapter progressed, same goes its quality. Overall, I love this book and hope many will find it intereting amd awesome too! Cheers!
Yun Da Xia oh girl just how much are you keeping inside yourself. I really really loved this novel and would like to give it a big thumbs up. From writing style to world background and characters everything was just too awesome. Yes everything has their own good and bad things and the worst thing of this novel is it's keeping me on edge. I want more..... I'm too hungry to be satisfied just with this much. Haha. Keep it going author and under no condition should you drop it. Never. Thank you. Love XiaXia.
This story is like a breath of fresh air. It's not like the typical transmigration plot where the FL is abused, have a jealous and little miss lotus sisters. I'm confused at first but since this story- I noticed is slow in progression in the plot- I'm getting hooked in to this. The synopsis is intriguing also, I hope you'll update more if you can and give us the sweet pleasure that a nice story gives to the readers.
This is part of a review swap valid as of Chapter 13 - Writing Quality: This is my second review swap with thus author, and I have to say I'm impressed with how much the writing quality has gotten better. The flaws I detected in the previous novel are non existence here. The author has beautifully written, described the events well which helps create a picture in the readers mind. (5/5) Update: 5/5 - Stable Story Development and World Background: I like the current pace of the story. Although some people may think the build up is slow, I feel like the current pace works. I will give word background 5 stars too, the transition from the opening to the second chapter flowed well. Character Design: The female lead isn't your typical average lead. I like how calm and collected her character is, and yet at the same time you can tell she isn't a pushover. You can tell that she's thinking for herself; and not hesitating with her actions or decisions (something typically found in most stories). As for the arrogant prince, I'm a bit curious about him 🤔🤔 Did he really have no feelings for the previous owner of the body?
