Reviews of The World isn't as Ugly nor Beautiful as You Think

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Honestly, I'm laughing my ass off when reading the hilarious scene when Author and Alfi break the 4th wall but nonetheless, it's maybe can be compared to Konosuba but just tone it down and don't overdo the absurd comedy part.

As mentioned in my chapter comment, I think this is a unique idea! I want to see what happens with this writing style in the future, so please keep us updated!

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more chapters.

You did great work at breaking the 4th wall. When you started with "Once upon a time" I was thrown off guard as authors don't usually use it to show variation but you actually pull it off fine. Keep up great work author

Nice story, I like the scene where Alfi met Megumi at last, and that was hilarious. Meeting your Waifu in real human form, that will make everyone envy. And the scene where Kartika feel for Alfi, that went too fast, dude, well, just like what happened to my story in which the heroine always give the protagonist trouble LOL Good luck, dude. I love this story

I don't know what sort of POV the story is written in. The banter is unusual and jarring and grammar errors are a huge issue. Characters are a bit unreal, the setting is not clearly outlined and information is mixed up. I would recommend serious editing. Good luck.

nice plot and storyline, love the php scrypt for the magic spells, but beware of the typo kkk...hmm what else should I type.. ah, waiting for next update lolz