alceee
Its a good read. Ive noticed a few errors in grammar and spelling, but the story is okay. Though I can't tell if tge main character is good or evil, which is spicy. The seen where Gary's mom was killed by that wolf was gory...Im impressed that you managed to implant that image in my head. It raised my opinion of this book a lot. I have a few problems. One is that that i havent been given a description of Ren himself. Overall..good job. Feel free to read and review my book, Draga of the Vanguard.