Comments of chapter undefined of A Cheap, OP Brawler
A Cheap, OP Brawler
Orange_Rain
Chapter comments6
Huh I've been reading this novel for 1 and a half years on and off and i have to say, do you even have a plan to make this story go anywhere? I mean, 2 years, 2 freaking years and how many chapters is this? A lot, but the story progress? Nada, like how can you even make a story this long while maintaining a non existing plot progression? I dont dislike the story as a whole but the progression. Like make the story move, no sense in splitting chapters that could have been just a single one and make progress in the story. Rant over
Yeah, I'm sorry about that. I honestly dove into writing this story head-first without much of a plan, and it was MUCH different in the early stages before it became as you see today. These days, I have a lot going on in my life right now and I'm basically writing enough to make the weekly quota for updates, which may be why the story looks to be dragging in progression. I can't deny some of these chapters can be put together instead, and they probably should. At some point, I might take a break from this story so I can actually form a good plan for its progression, maybe go back to the earlier chapters to see if I can clean them up and maybe combine some of them together to make the reading smoother.
