As a fellow writer, I understand that we have a long way to go if English is not our primary language. However, since I understand this point, this also means that there's plenty of room for improvement. Hey, my grammar is not perfect as well so I'll be frank and try to motivate you to do better as well. So writing quality is 3/5
Stability of Updates
Readers like to read novels that have a stable release date. Make sure to work on that as well. 3/5
Story Development:
To be honest, this is the first time I've seen a one-year-old do all those things and more. So I'll give you props for your imagination and award you with 4/5
Character Design:
It's a bit wild and unorthodox, but it works so why not? 5/5 here for you.
World Background
The world building is nice and the first few chapters are hinting that something big is about to happen. Will look forward to everything once you are able to give stable releases 4/5 for this one.
Overall Score 3;8
This novel is promising. If you can manage to get an editor it would slowly turn into something awesome. So I hope, that you will be able to get an editor for your work. No, make that, I hope that the two of us can find a good editor for our stories. Kudos and more power to you ;)
