Comments of chapter undefined of The Wish of the Dragon

Issei 100% deserves to get cucked, he has I don't even know how many girls lusting after his sorry ass yet he NEVER made a move, the girls want cock so they have to go elsewhere. Fucking beta Male

Hate it. Dont make notes in the middle of the chapter. It just ruins the story, if you have something to add then do it at the end of the chapter.

congratulations you managed to make me sad, I really hate NTR i hope in the next chapter didn't have NTR Thanks for the chapter

Fuck man, after reading that fanfic my emotions were on a rollercoaster ride. I don't ever want to read such a story ever again. Whenever I read something, I always immerse myself into the characters shoes so I was extremely angry and sad at the same time reading about issei. It's like somebody stabbed me in the chest with a sword. I wanted nothing more than wanting those girls to feel what he felt. I wanted to make them feel despair. I wanted to make them suffer. I wanted to make them know that they will never get another chance. Fuck. Shit. I hate this feeling lol. I was chanting " This is AU. This is AU. It's just one possibility among infinite others. No way they would be like this in the original universe. Yeah this is just AU." Lol XD. And so, I'll never ever read such thing as ntr ever again. Period! Though I'll give this a try and see if it's different than that fanfic.

Mr. Author I read it. Kind hate the girls now. Fortunately, Kuroka is not one with them. Phew.

This NTR sect junior disciple greet the "i smell NTR in this chapter" *bows*

I think the grammar is what makes it so hard to read. Please, update spacing and sentence structure. If it's easier to read, we'll read more of it!!

the dialogue kinda awkward because paragraph spacing issue which make my eyes dizzy!

https://***.fanfiction.net/s/13032812/1/The-Change-of-a-Dragon

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What’ the original fanfic that this is from?

wich chapter his revenge starts ?

Time reread from the beginning first chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

the fanfic, the change of a dragon was really good, really really good! i just dont know why it stopped at 11 chapters and I tried to search more of it but got nothing!! i liked how Issei turned out there after the change he undergo and i like the whole plot... just that it stopped at 11th chapter so can anyone tell me if it has more chapters or 11 was really the end of it???

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