Solate
Es una historia exelente, y tienes mi apoyo al 100% me encanta, la empeze a leer hoy y voy en el capítulo 29 ... Eh leido comentarios quejándose de algunas faltas gramaticales y me gustaría ofrecerte mi ayuda si aún no tienes alguien que te edite en inglés ya que soy bilingüe, será totalmente gratis, como dije me encanta tu trabajo y espero que no lo dejes, si te interesa por favor contáctame y puedo editar tu trabajo antes que lo postees, claro no es por leerlo antes que nadie claro que no jejeje ares040508@gmail.com este es mi contacto espero que lo consideres como dije no quiero nada a cambio, solo que sigas haciendo un exelente trabajo
I really liked this novel, it is rare to find a novel of dxd that is not the same formula repeated 99% of the time. And luckily the mc is not that kind of character with those totally generic personalities of animes. The story is progressing very well, the updates are at a good pace. The only problem was grammar, but it was only in the older chapters, now everything is fine. I recommend it, it's really a good story to spend time reading.
bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic
Cannot read anymore. It's gotten impossible. And the story makes no sense either. he is somehow attracting women who are 4 times his age and it's honestly pissing me off. Some weird pedophile ****. On top of that the grammar is atrocious. So much untranslated and unedited content it's becoming far too hard to read at all. And this is just at 33% through the story at chapter 32. What's next? Full spanish or japanese chapters? No not reading anymore.
Brother, nothing against you, but do you realize that Freezer can wipe out one planet with his finger in its weakest form? But you put here the DB force under the power of DXD? Do not you think that's a little over the top to make the SSJ so weak? Please do it right SSj never loses against Loki so please a little stronger for the DB force.