so this is my first ever novel i made so don't expect something great and pls advise me so i can get better and english is not my first language this story is about a child who was abandoned because of his talent but one day he awakens his talent what is the future hold for him well he take revenge or forgive his family and what is the mystery power he his got... first ark story the story will change every ark
in a room a women with a golden hair and eye was given birth
women: ahhhh... it.... hurts
a doctor: hold on madam it well be over soon.
says the doctor while he was worrying
few minutes later
doctor: its a twin.
a big burden was lifted from his shoulder
suddenly the door was open a middle age man with a blue hair and red eyes walks to the room with a mix of happiness and worry
man: how are you wife.
says the man with a worry face
women: I'm..alright.. husband.. where is my children? i want to see.. them.
says with a pain expressions
doctor: here madam its a boy and a girl
women: my children.
said the women with a smile
the children were crying out in their mother nestle
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4 years in the future
a boy with a golden hair and a red eye his name was Gil
he was sitting in a grass and thinking about the upcoming awaking of the talent.
he hear a footsteps coming toward his site
a girl with blue hair and eyes and a face that could rival the moon her name was Elizabeth
Elizabeth: little brother what's wrong.
says the girl with worried face
Gil:sis I'm worried about the upcoming awaking of the talent i don't know if my talent is good and what if it was trash one.
Elizabeth: don't worry lil brother it will be fine. and you were always a talented young boy you were able to walk when you were 4 month and speak it 8 month i wasn't able to do that in tell i was 2 years old.
Elizabeth said to encourage her brother
Gil: i hope so but i don't know why i have a bad feeling about it