Destiny_Aitsuji
This story is heavily inspired by the manga "A loveprize in viewfinder". And while the original story is really good, this author accomplished to make it even more to my taste. The characters of Asami and Akihito match the original to 80 and 95% respectivley. Akihito doesn't run away as much as he does in the original, so a real relationship can be developed. And Asami treats Akihito from the beginning more like he does in the middle of the manga. We skip all the rapey parts. So for me, this author cut out everything I didn't like about the manga and highlighted everything I loved about it. And as a bonus: Fei Long and Tao are also mentioned, and Fei Long plays a big role. So author, thank you for a very good read!
Well written and captivating. Perfectly suited for light reading. The plot develops smoothly without rushing or taking unnecessary detours. The writing is well edited with no grammatical errors although the flow of reading sometimes dips oddly. Well done and thank you for providing an entertaining and well thought out story.