Aikido!? Really? One of the very few martial art that tries to prevent harm for both the user and the victim. A martial art that calls other arts 'too violent'. How the hell is that a good choice when going in the violent path! Just WHY?!
He didn't portray bipolar properly, and the father seems more of an as.shole than abusive... Definitely not enough to turn you in to the unfeeling MC, but it would land you in therapy.
Dayum good mc author (perfect candidate to transfer in a strength based society)
Finally a decent mc
He definitely got his father's genes lol
Very promising đ
>father had bipolar,
Jesus fucking christ, I can't read for more than a second before another mistake pops up. You forgot to add "disorder" after 'bipolar'.
This is from the first sentence of the second paragraph.
